achanak se aakar, waqt ki daleelein bohot kuch keh gayeen,
sahara chhoot gaya aur khwahishein sehem kr reh gayeen,
dehlane ko mujhe, waqt ki kisi tarqeeb sa lagta hai,
Lekin, bas shuru shuru mein thoda ajeeb sa lagta hai ....
Jis habeeb (friend) par waar diye the donon jahan apne,
aaj woh hi ik lauta raqeeb (enemy) sa lagta hai,
Lekin ..... bas shuru shuru mein thoda ajeeb sa lagta hai ....
Kahan kami chhodi thi maine jo ranjish ko panah mili,
kush khaami toh na thi,par thi agar toh uski wajah na mili,
mera junoon hi is sailab ki, unhe, taqrib (reason) sa lagta hai,
Lekin, bas shuru shuru mein thoda ajeeb sa lagta hai ....
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well i totally empathise with u,
ajeeb kuch ish tarah se lagtah hai jaiseh samudra bin paani keh gareeb gareeb sa lagtah hai, jaiseh yeh shareer sunh(numb) hueh dil sa lagtah hai.
must say u write beautifully, nd keep writing coz it not only heals but revives also.
jo samajhte nahin junoon ko,
woh haqdaar nahin hote uske.
par fir bhi yeh dil tadapta hai,
jab deedar nahin hote uske.
tu kyon khud mein kami talaashta hai
yeh to rang hi aisa hai bahaaron ka
nigaahein to saaf hai ae deewane teri
bas chehra hi dhundhla gaya hai zamaane ka
this is really good yaar,.. though i wanted to write something in poetry b'coz everybody here has,.. my knowledge of urdu or poems ends right where it begins,.. so i'll just use simple language -
the lines were really touchy,.. good piece of art,... keep writing ,. and do inform me when you scribble something funny,.. b'coz actually that's my genre.. but till then all the best
bahut achhe !!!
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